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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

What an entrance! I was waiting for Arddun's next move.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Hmm, maybe I should have shortened this chapter so that she’d appear next week. Drag it out a bit?

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

I'm glad you didn't - my nerves can't take it! I even tapped the ‘Next Chapter' link in the vain hope you'd double-published 😂

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

My nerves couldn’t take it either. And this is not even the point where Panawr started arguing with me for her life.

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

😮😮

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Panawr may have dismissed rebellion, but Arddun did not. Her treatment at Cynwal's hands hardened her resolve.

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Jenny Homan's avatar

An interesting turn. I was expecting Panawr to leap in front of the weapon, to make them kill him instead. He was supposed to save Trachmyr. And yet he did nothing. Now Arddun walks.as one possessed. I thpight it strange that there was no mention of her fate. Just what will she do?

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Panawr isn’t exactly your straightforward hero type.

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Rosie B's avatar

That was a heavy scene. Poor Trachmyr he deserved better. Yes, Go Arddun!!!

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