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genie’s writing room 🥀's avatar

I found this fascinating, I love your vivid descriptions and the creative way of using dialogue!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Thank you very much! And thanks for subscribing!

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

Oh, that was sinister! The power of the crown, and at the end, the way he lost his mind too. Your descriptions are so vivid, I was flinching when he changed into the monster. (I'm loving the titles too 😂).

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

I know. I don't like reading horror, let alone writing it but this definitely required a dark turn!

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

It worked perfectly. I think that's one of the reasons why I found it so shocking, as I'm used to your other writing. You make both genres work!

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GrousyGirl's avatar

I did not expect the sinister ending either! Wow. I like the monster...

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Thanks! It won’t be the last time you see him…

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