Not at all. I prefer tales where you get to know the characters first, and the action follows from their personalities and abilities that we have come to know.
This is awesome! I'm late to the party though. Feeling somewhat disoriented, do they like, transform in the water? Communicate via telepathy? It's a little confusing. I'll probably have to catch up to properly understand. Homework again... Yay!
Arthur! 😃
Yes! Hopefully that wasn’t too much backstory to read.
Not at all. I prefer tales where you get to know the characters first, and the action follows from their personalities and abilities that we have come to know.
This is awesome! I'm late to the party though. Feeling somewhat disoriented, do they like, transform in the water? Communicate via telepathy? It's a little confusing. I'll probably have to catch up to properly understand. Homework again... Yay!
Jenny, yes you’ll have to catch up. Chapter 5 shows one part of the transformation and …. Chapter 7 (I think) shows the transformation upon entering Caer Morgana. Here’s your starting point: https://open.substack.com/pub/projectstarfish/p/start-here-the-mordreigiau-chronicles?r=1mk6at&utm_medium=ios
Oooh, thanks! That makes it much easier. I love your style by the way. Your whole newsletter's look, is really beautiful.
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed even an out of order snippet!
Llyr is growing as a character and becoming very real!