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Nick Richards's avatar

Arthur! 😃

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Yes! Hopefully that wasn’t too much backstory to read.

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Nick Richards's avatar

Not at all. I prefer tales where you get to know the characters first, and the action follows from their personalities and abilities that we have come to know.

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Jenny Homan's avatar

This is awesome! I'm late to the party though. Feeling somewhat disoriented, do they like, transform in the water? Communicate via telepathy? It's a little confusing. I'll probably have to catch up to properly understand. Homework again... Yay!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Jenny, yes you’ll have to catch up. Chapter 5 shows one part of the transformation and …. Chapter 7 (I think) shows the transformation upon entering Caer Morgana. Here’s your starting point: https://open.substack.com/pub/projectstarfish/p/start-here-the-mordreigiau-chronicles?r=1mk6at&utm_medium=ios

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Jenny Homan's avatar

Oooh, thanks! That makes it much easier. I love your style by the way. Your whole newsletter's look, is really beautiful.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed even an out of order snippet!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Llyr is growing as a character and becoming very real!

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