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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Thank you. It is Welsh. The adjective goes after the noun in Welsh.

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Elisabeth Fuchs's avatar

Now you're talking! Love the re-appearing of Llyr, and the establishing of love interests plural here. Also her finding her true heritage... so many strands here... and again, I'm cliffhanging. Well done! - I could see this as a movie, btw.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

That’s good because it’s so visual in my brain!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

It’s cinematic, I agree.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

So many more questions. I like Tregallas! But how is he all that intuitive?

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

because they are talking of magical secrets perhaps?

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I don’t know. I think you’re right. But it’s me.. I wasn’t expecting him to be helpful and understanding. Him being the son of a lord has lead me down a limited path if beliefs that as the story progresses I need to re evaluate.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Ah. Yes, well, do remember the dinner the day before. He’s not exactly the beloved son of a lord.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Yes there were clues… I have to keep reading! Love it so far Leanne!

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