Chapter 23 of "A River Trembles", Book Two of The Môrdreigiau Chronicles
“A draig môr came for me.”
Never would I have thought such a sentence would instill dread in me!
I kinda love that it did. But don’t worry. It gets worse.
So much frantic action here! Leaves me breathless. The confusion and disorientation of being in battle really comes through. Well done! Also I love the overlapping viewpoints.
Yes, to Eidothea it was all chaos. Llyr knew the moves. I’m glad that came across!
So this was the sea dragon battle! I like how it came out. The various perspectives are done so well.
I got a chill when Rhiannon came to Lady Angharad's corner of the garden.
Thank you! I shall have to do my deep dive on dreigiau môr battle techniques some point soon!
“A draig môr came for me.”
Never would I have thought such a sentence would instill dread in me!
I kinda love that it did. But don’t worry. It gets worse.
So much frantic action here! Leaves me breathless. The confusion and disorientation of being in battle really comes through. Well done! Also I love the overlapping viewpoints.
Yes, to Eidothea it was all chaos. Llyr knew the moves. I’m glad that came across!
So this was the sea dragon battle! I like how it came out. The various perspectives are done so well.
I got a chill when Rhiannon came to Lady Angharad's corner of the garden.
Thank you! I shall have to do my deep dive on dreigiau môr battle techniques some point soon!