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Delena Beth Knight's avatar

Ohhhh ~~ the suspense!!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Glad you’re enjoying. I made a couple of updates today. The email readers won’t see them alas, but I really need to listen when I get the “that sounds clunky” nudge and not go “naahh it’ll be all right” ‘cause they stick out like a sore thumb after publishing.

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Delena Beth Knight's avatar

👍👍

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Jenny Homan's avatar

Ph how is Eidothea going to travel inland if she's full dreigiau mor now! And just what did Jasper suggest that could have made her want to bolt? This is awesome! I want more!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

I am married to a scientist so of course there will be an experiment!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Back to evaluating Mr Tregallas… still not sure he is trustworthy. What about the father? Is he on hus daughter’s side?

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Love hearing you process this aloud. I think it’s fairly safe to say the father wants the best for his daughter. Whose best is the question though, isn’t it?

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Yes thinking aloud. Well written novel! I’m so impressed. Yes, whose best. I think the father is also processing a lot of things that are going on and it seems to me he’s coming into some realisations of his own. Btw I haven’t understood who is Jasper’s mother? I’ve been binge reading this. Can you tell?😂

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

I can and I’m loving it. I can’t quite remember when you learn about Jasper’s mother, but keeping the family tree straight always kept me checking it. I’m, you’ll see…

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

😁

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