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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Excellent beginning! Sparks are flying!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

As promised!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Very nice opening! I'm looking forward to seeing where things go next for these two intriguing characters... 😎

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Thank you. We’ll, I could tell you what happens, but where would be the fun in that.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Haha! Yes, a story gradually unfolding and revealing itself, is one of the most exciting parts of the journey, for sure... 😎

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

Glad you included audio 😊

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

I know it’s an AI voice but it seemed an easy way to do audio without having to record it (it’s a setting). I haven’t listened to it myself though. Is it ok?

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

It’s not bad. I’ve been trying to limit screen time, so it helps if I can listen.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

I listened to the beginning. Aside from getting Môrdreigiau wrong, it didn’t do too badly, and it’s a very relaxing voice. If it were up to me, I’d be doing silly voices like I was reading a kids book!

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

I’ve been doing voiceovers for my chapters as I can find quiet time at home. I’m no voice-actor, but it’s fun!

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Ken W.'s avatar

Lady is getting a power connection straight to the top thrown at her. And one that's her age and has chemistry with her too!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Well, they would both deny the chemistry at this point. 😎

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Kate's avatar

Nice tension ! Keen to read more!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

You won’t have long to wait. Next chapter drops tomorrow!

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