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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Sweets for the sweet, eh?

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Or you know, it tastes like death…

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

😂😂😂

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Ahh, how wonderful! They were clearly destined to meet again. It's also fascinating the way the gradual awakening of their emotions has also begun to awaken their taste buds. Very nicely done... 😎

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Ooh that is a nice parallel. It’s like they were …. destined to be together!

Jenny Homan's avatar

I love the way he thinks of Arddun in the midst of his tasting, that he has that sudden urge to share this wonderful new thing with someone he knows will appreciate it just the way he does. And then the moment he notices her, realising shes actually pretty... sweet.

Rosie B's avatar

Oh, they knew each other! There is so much more to this I feel...

Leanne Shawler's avatar

There might be. This one is my favorite chapter.

Marie Howalt | SFF Writer's avatar

I get why this is a favourite of yours! It was super cute with a side of plot-thickening!

Leanne Shawler's avatar

so stinkin' cute!